2016年9月25日托福独立写作范文：The university will spend money on dormitory to improve the life quality of stude

2016年9月25日托福独立写作范文：The university will spend money on dormitory to improve the life quality of students, which of the following do you think is the best way?

1、providing a room for quiet study;

2、building an exercise room;

3、Providing entertainment place (watch film)

托福写作解析：

选择第二个选项-健身房

1.对健康好 > 学习角

a.身体健康：相比于学习角，建一个健身房可以避免久坐，锻炼肌肉，伸展身体，对于身体健康好

b.心理健康：学习会遇到困难，会给人造成精神压力，而建立一个健身房可以让人从现有的烦恼中分心出来，对于心理健康好

2.对友谊好 > 娱乐角

a.更容易结交新朋友：不同于娱乐角，健身房所有人都会去，所以可以遇到不同背景的人，更有机会遇到兴趣或价值观相同的人，结交新朋友

b.更容易和老朋友维系关系：可以通过和老朋友一起去健身房交流生活维系关系，但是娱乐角往往比较吵闹，无法交流

托福独立写作范文一：

It is a misconception that college students can be soaked in the pleasure of living a campus life and thus barely pay attention to the quality of their dormitories. In fact, it is exactly because their dorm life is cheerful that they have a good time on campus. If a university has some money to spend on providing a better dorm life for the students, it is advisable that the university use the money to build a room for quiet study.

This room is certainly more desirable than a room for physical exercise or a room for leisure. Here comes the first reason. There must be a sport center where students can go to for physical exercise. As a matter of fact, it may be a quite large complex that includes a gym and an indoor multi-functional sport court and probably a number of other features. If a student wants to sweat, the sport center is where to go. At this point, it is fair for some to point out that the library likewise serves a need that the dorm does not need to serve and that students may visit the library if they want to study. However, does a student need to exercise through the night? A student who is desperate to burn some calories can do the night run outside. Can a student who is eager to study go outside and read under the street lamp?Also, quietness is certainly unnecessary when a student do fitness training, and it is required but cannot be guaranteed for another student who tries to read when the dorm mates lift weights or run on a machine and make noises in a nearby room (we cannot assume that the dorm building has space for the gym to be far enough from dorm rooms or that the room is absolutely sound-proof).

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托福独立写作范文二：

With the masses increase in affluence and awareness, college students tends to be spoiled with all kinds of well-equipped dorms. Private Jacuzzi, big screen TV set and even tanning salon are not rare on some college dorms. When it comes to the question of what the school should build in the dorm, I personally would say it is in the students' best interest to build an entertainment room for the following reasons.

Admittedly, a quiet study room can provide a place for students to focus on their academic assignments and an exercising room affords them the opportunities to keep fit and stay in good shape, nonetheless, these facilities are redundant since an above-average university has at least one decent library and a recreation center for students and faculty members. Thus, it is not necessary to include such facilities in the campus dorms, and there are obvious benefits to build an entertainment room with home theater sets and video game consoles.

First off, an entertainment room provides students a chance to get away from busy life and study and switch off. As is known to all, college life can be overwhelming, students are constantly under lots of academic pressure, like presentations, group projects, final exams, so on and so forth. Barely do they have chance to release their pressure, fortunately with an entertainment room, they can watch movies or play video games together. As the saying goes, “all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Indeed, recent research on the correlation between leisure time and students' academic performance conducted by National Association of Psychiatrists shows that a student with certain amount of time spent in doing entertainment activities are observed to have higher grade than those who don't. Consequently, entertainment room helps to improve students' academic performance.

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