2019年1月12日托福独立写作范文：Do you think that it’s better to travel to different countries when you are young

2019年1月12日托福独立写作范文：Do you think that it’s better to travel to different countries when you are young than when you are older?

托福写作思路解析：

1. Professional

a.locate a career 年轻人可以通过旅行来寻找自己的工作兴趣，从而找到合适自己的工作，而老年人已经有稳定的工作，不需要再通过旅行来找工作了。

b. promote 年轻人可以通过再旅行过程中cultivate 时间管理能力等晋升必要的技能和品质，而老年人不需要在工作中晋升了。

2. Personal

a.health 年轻人比老年人更健康，更适合旅行，而老年人可能有潜在的疾病如心脏病，并不适合旅行

b.relationship 年轻人旅行可以结交很多新朋友，而老年人不需要用旅行在去拓宽他的朋友圈了。

范文1：

It is better for people to travel to different countries when they are young than to wait until they are older. Younger travelers gain many useful experiences and skills. By waiting until they are adults, people lose out on many opportunities that could assist in situations throughout their lives.

Travel is an opportunity to supplement education about new places, cultures, people, and languages. A basic understanding of such things is taught in schools, but travel provides students with an opportunity to experience such things in person. Therefore, travel rounds out a classical education and solidifies what is learned. For example, a person may take several years of a foreign language such as German in school, but never have a chance to practice outside of the classroom. That person will invariably forget most of the language. However, if that person goes to Germany and talks with local people, he or she will remember the words better and develop a stronger understanding of the language and culture.

Not only does travel reinforce standard education, but it is also a chance to get a viewpoint that is not taught in formal academic settings. Going to new places opens doors for making friends and seeing life from a different angle. Such an expansion helps break down dangerous stereotypes and biases that lead to hatred, prejudice and war. It is important to have these experiences as early in life as possible to create a more just and equal society.

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范文2：

Mature adults are more prepared for travel than young people are, so it is advisable to wait before visiting foreign countries. People who wait are better able to understand what they see, they have experience to deal with problems, and they have more financial flexibility.

First, travel to a foreign country inevitably involves seeing new things. Schools, though, do not prepare students for the realities of a completely different place. Mature adults can take the time to research about where they are going and get the most out of the experience. For example, it might be pretty to see the Great Wall of China. However, if the viewer understands the history of the wall and knows its purpose and the effort involved in building it, the experience of looking at the wall is greatly enriched. It is therefore wise for people to go to places that they have had time to study in depth rather than just go to famous places when they are very young.

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