2016年7月2日托福独立写作范文：Competition between friends always has a negative effect on their friendship. 

2016年7月2日托福独立写作范文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Competition between friends always has a negative effect on their friendship. 

解题思路：

竞争有不良影响

1.不利于沟通

a.不能互相信任：因为存在相互竞争，总是在担心对方说的话到底是发自内心还是为了赢得竞争

b.减少了见面交流的时间：为了赢得竞争，希望用更多的时间提升自己，比如上一些课程，学一些技能，而不是见面交流

2.不利于互相帮助

a.不能解决工作中的问题：因为存在竞争，当工作上出现问题时不会互相帮助，不会互相提供建设性的建议

b.不能解决日常生活中的问题：因为存在竞争，希望对方将更多的时间投入解决日常生活中的问题，所以不会提供解决方案

2016年7月2日托福独立写作范文一：

It has often been thought that completion could be either beneficial or harmful to friendship. When you compete too much with your friends, it could mean the end of a good relationship. In any case, you ought to learn well how to distinguish what is healthy competition between friends and what is not.

More often than not, there is nothing wrong with healthy competition between friends. For example, when you play sports or games and try to beat your friend, competition is normal and natural. This type of competition is healthy because, win or lose; both friends could enjoy it in good humor. Further, betting on which team will win is also a healthy way to compete between friends, without causing resentment and conflict whatever. Generally speaking, positive competition would do you good, motivating you to work harder and strive for more. When in doubt at this point, it is always inspirational to recall the teaching of Confucius: "Friends are more beneficial who are better than you, one way or another."

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2016年7月2日托福独立写作参考范文

In the contemporary society full of pressures, rivalry has crept into nearly every area of our life, which has never failed to attract public attention. Given its ubiquitous presence, many people claim that friends will be pulled apart due to the competition. However, as far as I am concerned, the above claim has oversimplified the situation. Acctually, whether competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendship depends on what kinds of friendship they have established.

On the one hand, the competition between friends will have no negative effect on genuine friendship without any ulterior objectives. As is common sense, in the genuine friendship based on goodness, friends will always desire the good for each other. As a result, competition between them will be regarded as a good chance to achieve self-improvement and thus enhance mutual respect, which will be the foundation of forming a stronger friendship. Take my own experience as an example. Last semester, I and my best friend, Steve, competed for the presidents of the student union. In the course of engaging in the contest, both of us gave our best efforts to make well-prepared work, like writing and revising the speech draft, practicing the oral speech repeatedly and so on, which made us achieve great self-improvement. Whatever the result of the contest was, steve and I were more proud of each other for our progress, resulting in a closer relationship.

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