2018年6月30日托福独立写作范文：Some people have ambitious dreams and keep pursuing them, but others think we sho

2018年6月30日托福独立写作范文：Some people have ambitious dreams and keep pursuing them, but others think we should always focus on and try to achieve realistic dreams

托福写作解析：

有实际的梦想更好

1. 心理健康

a.压力小：梦想切实可行，比较具体，能够通过努力达到，自己不用因为完不成过分焦虑和紧张

b.容易获得成就感：完成梦想后能够获得满足感，提升自信心，有成就感

2. 支持帮助

a.更容易获得朋友家人的帮助：朋友和家人能够理解自己的梦想，能够提供支持和鼓励，提供资源帮助自己实现梦想

b.更容易获得陌生人的帮助：陌生人会欣赏自己的梦想，认为自己比较踏实，更愿意提供物质帮助和精神支持

托福独立写作范文一：

Having big goals in life is paramount to a life with any definition of success: if you don’t know where you are going, any road is a good enough one. The bigger the goal is, the better. A dream is just a very large goal if someone is serious about achieving it. I think it is better to pursue ambitious dreams as opposed to merely achieving realistic goals for that reason. Go big.

To begin, properly pursuing any dream will require satisfying many smaller, realistic goals. Once the dream is decided, the method of achieving it comes into focus by breaking it down into smaller parts. For example, if Joe’s dream is to become the best DJ in his city, he needs to, first, develop his DJ skills. This may take years, and he may need to finish school or work unsatisfying jobs while he pushes himself everyday to learn what he loves. Then, he needs to market himself as an artist: getting gigs at clubs, parties, and events. Maybe he needs a manager or a record label deal. Finally, he should make products and music that sell, funding his career. All three of these steps are complicated and take a lot of work. They, too, should be broken down into smaller, more realistic goals until he satisfies one of his dreams.

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