2020-08-04 来源:
2017年11月26日托福独立写作范文:In the past people ate food that was better for their health than they do today。
这道题目重复了中国大陆考区2011年1月8日和北美考区2015年10月31日的题目
托福写作思路点拨:
现在吃得更健康
1.更好的健康教育
a.课堂中会学习健康的知识:现在的人可以在课堂中学习健康有关的知识,从而健康饮食。
b.提高了健康的意识:现在的人提高健康意识,吃有机食品。
2. 更好的科技
a .在社交平台交流饮食健康:人们会在社交网路平台上交流饮食健康的知识。
b.科技提高了农业的水平:现在的科技水平提高农业水平,吃的也更无害化。
托福独立写作范文:
It is not uncommon that people nowadays easily suffer from diseases related to food quality. Compared with the relatively simple and natural food in the past, modern people are exposed to more choices including fast food, fried food and pickled food and thus they are more likely to choose some unhealthy food. Hence I agree to the statement that food in past are better for people’s health than food today.
On one hand, burdened with tighter schedule, modern people tend to eat outside more frequently instead of cooking by themselves. To improve the flavor and attract more customers, restaurants usually overuse oil, salt and other flavorings and exceed the consumption portion per day suggested by doctors. Consequently, as these flavorings are accumulated in people’s body, they are more likely to develop gastrointestinal diseases. What is worse, immoral businessmen use illegal cooking oil, chemicals and other pathogenic substance in their food products, leading to great threat to food safety. The news that melamine was found in the milk powder and more white collars are suffering from chronic gastritis both prove the worrying food quality at present. However, in the past, the economy was dominated by agriculture and people can be virtually self-sufficient. A diet mainly made up by coarse grains, vegetables and moderate meat significantly helps them maintain healthy and promote digestion. Therefore ,food in the past is more beneficial to people’s health.
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