2017年11月12日托福独立写作范文：Older teenagers (16-19) should be allowed to work at paid part-time job or not.

2017年11月12日托福独立写作范文：Older teenagers (16-19) should be allowed to work at paid part-time job or not.

托福写作思路点拨：

应该兼职

1.对学习好

a.学习到的实践知识更多：可以学到很多课外知识，都是平时学校当中学习不到的

b.激发学生学习的兴趣：会有information gap 在学校学习的知识和兼职中的知识，会激发学生兴趣

2.对个人发展好

a.培养独立性：在兼职中会遇到很多平时不会遇到的问题，需要自己独立去解决从而培养学生的独立性

b.培养金钱管理能力：也会挣到多余的钱，从而培养学生的金钱管理的技能

托福独立写作高分范文：

I have the preference that older teenagers (16-19) should be allowed to work at paid part-time job.

First of all, it is beneficial to find what you are good at and what kind of person you want to be, in the process of doing part-time job, for teenagers of this age。 As we all know, adolescence is fueled by confusion and uncertainty, besides a pool of promising possibilities, and the only solution to this issue is how well we understand ourselves.

Second, part-time jobs offer teenagers not only salary for the first time in their life, more importantly, but also certain individual abilities,necessary to their future, such as communication ability, cooperation ability, and even financial ability

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