2017年4月23日托福独立写作范文：Some young people are free in the evenings or have days off at school, which way

2017年4月23日托福独立写作范文：Some young people are free in the evenings or have days off at school, which way can bring them the most benefit? 1.to accumulate work experience by a part-time job or volunteering in a community 2.learning to play a sport 3.learning to play a musical instrument。

托福独立写作思路点拨：

第一个选项更好

1.参加兼职工作> 学运动

a.赚更多钱：参加兼职工作可以正更多的钱，有钱可以买喜欢的书和自己喜欢的东西。而通常运动比如去健身馆健身需要花钱。

b.获得知识：参加兼职工作可以获得更多知识，在平时生活以外的知识，而学运动不能。

2.参加志愿者活动> 学乐器

a.培养品质：(乐于助人)参加志愿者活动可以培养乐于助人的品质，在活动中帮助其他人。

b.培养能力：(人际交往、合作)能过见到各种类型的人，对于不同的人采取不同的交往技巧。 还需要和别人合作。

托福独立写作范文1：

Holidays with bright sunshine and golden beach are always the best image in our mind, but for young people, when they are facing the choices between part-time jobs, learning to play sports or musical instruments, most of them may feel confused. As to me, I suggest to grasp the opportunities to accumulate my working experience, which have already made a mass of students great beneficiaries.

The first benefit is to make them well-prepared for future challenges in workplace. Without the experience of part-time jobs or internship, students are restricted by schooling where they just learn about the theoretical knowledge, regardless of how much these books are related to their future career. Clearly, those fresh graduates will get a strong sense of frustration. On the contrary, if experiencing this gap in advance, they are trained to combine what they have learnt from books with the social practice, which eventually makes them easy when facing the realities after graduation. Compared with the future benefits, the current pain, clearly, doesn’t matter.

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2017年4月23日托福独立写作范文2：

It seems that everyone in the world aspires to achieve something so as to live life to the full, especially the young who have a glorious future before themselves. Although a vast majority of people agree with this notion, opinions on how to achieve one’s ambitious dreams or realistic goals are diverse. As a broad-disseminated idea goes that the other 8 hours of free time determine one’s success, an increasing number of young people are pondering a problem of how to maximize their “free” time – the 8 hours in the day when they are not studying, working or sleeping. As far as I am concerned, from the three above-mentioned ways to utilize the free time, I would unhesitatingly choose the second one – learning to play a sport.

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