2020-08-04 来源:toefl.socool100.com
2016年3月19日托福独立写作范文:Students in a university club want to help others, but they can only choose one project a year, which one of the following is the best? 1. Help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics; 2. Help people who cannot afford to build or rent a home to build a house; 3. Visit and assist elderly people with daily tasks.
托福写作解题思路:
选择第一个选项-教小学生阅读和数学
1.大学生有能力帮小学生 > 帮人建房子,大学生没有足够钱
a.有知识:对于大学生来说,小学生的阅读和数学很简单,大学生完全有足够的知识为小学生解答疑惑
b.有技能:大学生受教育很多年,因此在教学方法上也会有一定的心得体会,知道怎么样教可以让小学生快速掌握而且有兴趣学习
2.大学生有时间帮小学生 > 帮助老人
a.小学距离近,节省路途时间:小学就在附近,路上不用花很多时间,所以大学生可以腾出时间,但是老人的家可能比较远,那么大学生就没有足够的时间可以帮助老人因为大学生平时也有很多课程作业和课外活动
b.小学知识难度低,节约备课时间:小学的知识难度低,不需要很多时间备课,但照顾老人需要学习全新的专业护理知识,大学生没有这么多时间
托福独立写作范文:
With the improvement of educational system, various student associations and clubs, which are meant to equip their members with practical skills, have become a great part of the campus life. Therefore, when it comes to which kinds of activities these clubs should organize, teaching pupils maths, building houses for the homeless, or helping the old, people may tend to hold different notions. As for me, attending to the senior would be the best choice, for the following reasons.
First of all, looking after old people can help students to cultivate a sense of social responsibility and patience. As we know, one defining character of young adults is that they are generally too immature to understand what social responsibility is. It is not uncommon to observe that some teenagers are inclined to destroy the public properties on purpose, or even worse, they may tease or make jokes at the older people without any respect, all of which are irresponsible behaviours. Such conducts can be corrected once the sense of duty takes root in their mind by helping the old. Obviously, in the course of taking care of old people, students will be informed of the contribution made by the old generation to the development of the whole society, thus realizing their social obligation. Plus, the trivial things such as making meals, cleaning the room and so on are involved in the process of helping the old, which cannot be done without patience.
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