2016年1月24日托福独立写作范文：In times of an economic crisis, in which area should governments reduce its spend

2016年1月24日托福独立写作范文：In times of an economic crisis, in which area should governments reduce its spending? 1. Arts 2. Scientific research 3. Parks and public gardens. 

托福写作解题思路：

减少第三个选项

1.公园不是唯一能让人们健康的地方 < 艺术难被替代

a.在健身房锻炼身体：在健身房锻炼身体，可以锻炼肌肉，伸展身体，避免久坐，有很多专业器材可以锻炼身体，但是艺术难以通过去健身房替代

b.在电影院放松心情：在电影院看一些娱乐的电影，如喜剧片，科幻片，从平时繁忙的工作和生活压力中分心出来，有利于放松心情，然而去电影院也无法感受艺术，提升自己的审美水平

2.公园不是唯一能让人们维系关系的地方< 科学研究难被替代

a.借助网络及时联系：随着现在网络的覆盖，随时随地都可以通过手机或者电脑发及时消息获得联系，交流日常生活中的点滴，维系关系，但科学研究无法通过网络来实现或被取代

b.面对面交流：随着现在交通工具的迅猛发展，去一个地方已经不需要花很多时间，人们也可以通过见面交流来维系关系，但是科学研究不可以通过只是交流就能实现，必须要有资金支持实验

托福独立写作范文一：

When it comes to the economic crisis,the government vexes, people panic and the unemployed complain. In this very darkest time, what should we do to cope with this inevitable dilemma? After balancing the three possible solutions, education and the support for the unemployed may overweigh the health care。

Firstly, the positive effect of education lasts a long time and if there is any negligence in education, the consequence can be irrecoverable. Once a student passes his suitable age for studying, it’s impossible to put him back to the class to make up what he has missed. It is tantamount to strip them of their rights to attain quality education. Otherwise, cutting down the spending in education may cause more graduates not competent for the job. In this way, unemployment will be aggravated and there won’t be any improvement of the economic circumstances. In brief, limiting the cost on education might meet the pressing need but it is a decision which we will regret a lot in the future。

Secondly, shrinking the support for the unemployed may lead to the proliferation of the crime rate。When people are driven into a corner, they tend to be irrational and lose their mind to commit felonies. It will definitely lead to the instability of the society. In a great economic crisis, most of the citizens involved are already short of income, struggling desperately just for fulfilling the stomach, what can be worse than if they can’t feel the sense of security anymore in the society? Besides, the support for those who lose their jobs in the crisis doesn’t simply mean distributing the allowance to 

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托福独立写作范文二;

During an economic crisis, governments face difficult choices of monetary allocation with reduced budgets. In this challenging time, it is of vital importance for policy-makers to recognize the effectiveness of policy-making on certain social services or programs such as arts, scientific research and park and public gardens. If a choice has to be made, in my opinion, the government should reduce its spending on arts.

To begin with, in times of an economic crisis, it is significant for policy-makers to recognize the necessity of investing in scientific research because it exerts a far-reaching effect. If the financial crisis leads to substantial cuts in funding for scientific research by governments, it will be difficult to muster investment for a public good, like clean air, or for extremely risky initiatives, such as novel approaches to new antibiotic drugs, or in areas where the outcome is uncertain. As a matter of fact, technological innovation, biomedical breakthroughs, and tackling pressing environmental issues all require sustained scientific development, from basic discovery to final application. Investing in research is investing in the future, and it requires a long-term commitment to the accumulation of knowledge, the testing of basic principles, and the translation of these discoveries into practical applications that impact everyday life. Consequently, governments ought to attach more importance to the scientific studies so as to develop world class research base and conduct crucial scientific projects.

Furthermore, funding for parks and public gardens provides an opportunity for people to engage in physical activities, which is considerably beneficial to health. Nowadays, due to the sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy eating diet, overweight and obesity are epidemic problems across the world, and related conditions are on the rise. A primary focus of attention is providing environment where people can be physically active. Parks offer such an opportunity. In addition, health studies have shown that people who do regular exercise get a range of benefits when they are in natural settings, like parks and public gardens. These benefits include reduced risk of premature death; reduced risk of heart disease, hypertension, cancer; improved maintenance of muscle strength; weight loss and favorable redistribution of body fat; improved physical functioning. Therefore, when governments allocate fiscal spending on parks such as well-designed and well-maintained paths as well as attractive scenery, people can substantially improve their health and quality of life by doing moderate amounts of physical activity in their daily lives.

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