2015年1月31日托福独立写作范文：The rules that societies expect today young people to follow and obey are too str

2015年1月31日托福独立写作范文：The rules that societies expect today young people to follow and obey are too strict. 

托福写作思路：

确实有很多严格规则

1.学校中的规则严格

a.学习压力大：学校为了检测学生掌握知识的情况，经常会进行各阶段的考试，并按考试成绩给学生排名，导致学生学业负担重

b.课外需要参加很多活动：现在的学校要求学生要全面发展，学生为了能够被好大学录取，就需要花很多课外时间参加活动，比如：志愿者、夏令营等

2.工作中规则严格

a.找工作的规则严格：企业在招聘青年人时，常常优先录取学历高、有工作经验的人，对于那些学历不高、缺乏工作经验的青年人来说不占优势

b.晋升中的规则严格：青年人不仅要在综合素质、工作能力、工作年限等方面进行比拼，而且常常是多个人竞争一个晋升的职位，非常激烈

托福独立写作范文一：

Young people are bound by a wide array of social and legal conventions, and it seems to me that these rules are excessive and inappropriate. Too many strict rules have hindered the growth of young people.

If anyone needs convincing evidence that the society has created too many rules for young people, here is the proof. Social conventions are the first things that impeded the development of the young. Certain standardized paths are set for the young people in my country and these linear paths define the success of young people. Take schooling, one of the mechanisms for young people to gain success, as an example. It follows a route like this: 12-year-time education to prepare you for college which prepares you for work and an approach to a decent job with a brief period of independence before settling down as an adult. Deviating from this is generally called “go astray” and causes tensions in family. Therefore, it sounds horrible for young people to drop out of schools or colleges. However, this is exactly what Steve Jobs did. He became successful without following the most accepted route to success. The problem is that, the rules known as social conventions, which were initially intended to help young people, end up being obstacles.

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托福独立写作范文二：

Social rules play an important role in every society, but whether or not the rules for young people are reasonable can be controversial. Some people believe that social rules for young people today are too strict, while others think they are reasonable. I believe that social rules for young people are not only reasonable, but good, because they help young people behave themselves and prevent them from hurting themselves.

First and foremost, social rules exist as a way to instruct young people in proper conduct.For example, society expects young people to go to school every day and spend most of their day studying—this is to his or her own benefit. If this rule didn’t exist, young people might waste all their time playing video games or participating in other unimportant activities instead of spending their time learning how to read, write, and do mathematics.In this way, social rules help young people to use their time well and make good preparations for the future.

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