2014年11月8日托福独立写作范文A卷： Getting advice from older friends is more valuable than from the friends of th

2014年11月8日托福独立写作范文A卷：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from older friends is more valuable than from the friends of the same age as yours.

托福独立写作解题思路如下：

1.能在工作中帮忙

a.帮助找工作：年长的朋友对于从事工作有更好的建议，包括选择的公司，工作地点等

b.帮助晋升：年长的朋友可以传授你与领导同事相处的秘诀

2.能在生活中帮忙

a.教给我们锻炼身体的方法：年长的朋友有长年的健身经历，可以帮助你少走弯路

b.减轻精神压力：年长的朋友可以增加人们的自信，让人们学会放松

托福独立写作范文一：

When we are young, our life is simple and easy, the most worries for us is which lollipop should be saved to the last or how to win a matchbox from a friend. But when growing up, we have to face a brunch of complicated situations, job application, career choice, office rivalship and love relation, choices can never be as clear as to choose A or B on a test paper. Immersed in hardship, we hunger for useful advice, which mostly from older friends rather than from peers.

There’s no doubt that elders have more living experience than young people, which means a difficult situation you face for the first time may be an easy cake for them. Career choice is one dilemma young people face when they graduate from a university. Assuming that two job offers are in front, one is from a big joint venture but the salary is relatively low, the other is from a small private firm, while the position and salary they offered is much tempting. As a green finger, young man may take the second offer due to vanity, but if he can consult with elders, he can realize the risk in choosing a small private company, as when the whole industry goes downtown, small businesses are certain to die out. Advice from the older friend usually leads to a good consequence.

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托福独立写作范文二：

【首段】 背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

A close friend is what every individual longs after. After all, a day without friendship is like a day without sunshine. A true friend should be one from who we can resort to for help or get valuable suggestions when we are in time of adversity. People differ greatly in their views as to whether or not guidance and advice from older friends is superior to the counterparts from peers. As I see it, advice from elderly friends deserves more praises, although suggestions from our peers are never without their merits.

【二段】年长的朋友的建议的利好

For a start，rich life experience could be seen as a sort of precious wealth, including those bitter or frustrating experiences. Every individual grows up via experiencing failure or dilemma, one might，at times，feel puzzled，thereby，he or she needs advice and guidance from friends.

Under such circumstances, older friends could be our best teachers because they have accumulated a pool of life wisdom, thus, their advice could be precious life guidance. A survey is persuasive enough to justify my stand, the survey conducted by Vista, after consulting many people have found that most respondents claimed that compared with communicating with peers, they prefer to get advice from elderly friends, for their suggestions could help to diminish the likelihood of failure and avoid detours

【三段】年长的朋友的建议的利好

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