2014年5月25日托福独立写作范文：Parents must have strict rules to help their children to be successful.

2014年5月25日托福独立写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Parents must have strict rules to help their children to be successful? Please use specific details and examples in your answer.

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以下托福独立写作范文为赞同有严格规则的观点：

应该有严格的规则

1.对在校表现好

a.会让他们学习更多的知识：严格的规则让学生按时完成作业，参加各类学习班

b.会让他们多参加课外活动：严格的规则会让学生打篮球，踢足球，让他们取得好的表现

2.对个人发展好

a.能培养坚持不懈的精神：严格的规则意味着持续不断的努力以及克服重重困难

b.能培养他们独立的品质：严格的规则要求个人做事靠自己，吃穿住行

Parents always want what is best for their children. In order to ensure that their child enjoys a prosperous, happy and successful life, parents establish rules that will help shape the child’s identity and personality. I strongly advocate strict rules which will help parents guide their children on a path to success.

For young children, their energy seems boundless, yet their direction is unfocused. Take me for example. When I was young, I had trouble staying focused in school and my homework and test scored suffered as a result. My parents noticed this negative trend and looked for ways to help combat this inability to concentrate. My mother established strict study rules. Instead of long study periods after school, my mother made me study in small 25-minute segments followed by ten-minute breaks. She stringently forced me to stay focused for these 25 minutes and over a period of a few months slowly increased the study periods to one hour. Although I thought she was quite overbearing at the time, I realize now that she was training me and my brain to learn to stay focused for longer and longer periods of time. This led to success in the classroom and my teacher was impressed.

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以下为不赞同观点的托福独立写作范文：

As believed by many people, many Chinese parents hold that strict parenting is a decisive factor in helping their children succeed. However, I believe that children nowadays are burdened with too many rules and that strict rules don’t necessarily ensure a quick path to success.

Firstly, family rules and expectation imposed on children are often somewhat too pressing. Chinese education normally requires students to follow a standardized path to college graduation, suggesting drop-outs or occasional absence from classes are not to be tolerated. Parents, therefore, often demand students to follow the social conventions and not to violate any rules. Any deviation from the expectation is deemed to fail without question. However, the truth is that many successful people like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs rose to fame and success without completing their college curriculum. Strict rules may help children be better disciplined and guided, but is not an indispensable key to open the door of success.

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