2014年3月23日托福独立写作范文：after high school, graduates should take at least one year off to work or travel

2014年3月23日托福独立写作题目：Do you agree or disagree: after high school, graduates should take at least one year off to work or travel before entering university.

托福写作思路点拨：

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1.工作好

a.更容易找到好工作：工作让人们知道自己喜欢做什么，不喜欢做什么

b.提前积累经验，之后容易晋升：工作可以让毕业生提前适应社会，知道未来晋升的方法

2.旅游好

a.培养人际交往能力：旅游可以接触到社会上不同的人，增强人们的人际交往能力

b.培养克服困难的能力：旅游中会迷路，会食物短缺，人们可以学习如何克服

2014年3月23日托福独立写作范文一：

Taking a gap year has become a popular option for many graduating students. While some people believe that after a year-long break, students will somewhat get disacquainted from the learnt knowledge and suffer a tough time on reviewing the previous lessons, I believe this is only a small price to pay for the reward it earns.

Firstly, for students who had been busy preparing for the college entrance examination, a gap year is a good chance for them to get refreshed and re-focused. They can slow their pace down and get relaxed. A gap year bursting with travel, adventure and exploration can be fun-filled and intensely memorable especially after three years of hard work in study. Besides, a gap year gives them the time to figure out their future orientation.

2014年3月23日托福独立写作范文二：

The prevailing notion is that high school students are under huge pressure. Then appears a controversy whether students should have one year to engage in other things before they attend their university. After weighing the pros and cons, I am favor of the opinion that having a gap year can produce many benefits.

First off, students can benefit a lot from traveling. As everyone knows, to maintain strong competitiveness, high school students are required to accomplish a wide range of either required or optional curriculums at school and the rights to develop their own interests have been deprived relentlessly, which has proven to be a detriment of their growth. Instead of pursuing their bachelor degree without pause in the college, traveling can help them regain chances to cultivate and perfect their personalities and release pressure. For instance, many more college graduates are reported to be indifferent to the society and show no mercy on those in need, part of which owes a lot to the fact that schools lay more emphasis on cultivating students’ academic abilities and downplay the importance of developing their overall qualities. Traveling to those places in poverty can give students a sight of those impoverished families to call on the sense of responsibility. Besides, by paying a visit to some places of interest like the Great Wall or the pyramid in Egypt, students can approach the greatness of diverse culture. What’s more, the direct access to the natural world can appease students’ inner uproar. Accordingly, a gap year can be a great asset for high school graduates.

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